Thursday, April 17, 2014

Oulipost #17: Haikuisation

I doctored three sentences from "Diversity on the canvas" in today's Gulf Times into these triptychal haikulets:

matter pioneering
open-heartedly budding
gallery world

masterfully clay
vase of black wavy patterns
achieved granite piece

one composition
children may be memories
her life in painting


Anonymous said...

Love this: 'triptychal haikulets'.

The third haiku is especially fine.

Anonymous said...

Yes, esp. liked #3!

Bob said...

Thanks for noticing!

The third stanza is nice, I agree, and, Margo, perhaps, my cleverness got the best of me and my haicoos...